October Girl

All my pain is self choosen. My life is just a game. Take a good look at my wrists, at all of my veins. All the scars they spell out ...

This post is amazing, you have a great imaganation. I think that this might be some of the best work I've seen in a couple of weeks, whihc is good, ...

Hello, the name of this poem drew me in right away I HAD to read it. But I disliked how it ended. The last stanza was hard to read and ...

Suzanne, This poem didn't exactly hit me, I didn't feel much emotion coming from it. The title of it made me think, but it didn't shout out to me BRILLIANT! ...

I love this Angel, you were brillant! You're not forcing the rythem or the ryme I'm really proud of you. This piece is perfect. You put alot of emotion into ...

I feel like I've read this before, I feel so moved by it though, great job Angel. I can really feel a great vibe coming from this piece as if, ...

(Marc Luna) Even though I hated the guys guts I ran along with him. "What's wrong?!" I asked as he paced... I wanted something in my life to go right ...

(Marc Luna) "Sib, just... Just get some rest. We'll talk later." I kissed her forehead lightly and squeezed her hand, then I left out into the lobby, I needed a ...

Hello, I think this is very interesting. I'm so sorry to hear that has happened to you. I know what if feels like. The idea was brilliant and I loved ...

(Chelsea Luna) I sat back against the back of the bed and I listened to everything that Brian had just said. My eyes became watery, I felt my eyelid twich ...

ok I can work with that 7/10

(Chelsea Luna) I nodded. "So what exactly happened between you two. What you guys yell about? I mean I heard a little bit, but not much." I said. He looked ...

***taps foot, c'mon!!! ^_^*

(Chelsea Luna) "What exactly happened? All I remember was Marc bursting through the door." I asked holding his other hand, I finally smiled.

(Chelsea Luna) "I love you too." I tried to smile, but couldn't find one. "So when can we get out of here?" I asked him.